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Thursday, August 30, 2018

Disaster on the moon

                                                  Disaster On The Moon.           
We touched down. We had just landed on the moon and contacted NASA to tell them we had landed. Fully prepared our mission was underway and we weren't going home unless we had a new energy source   


 Jordan's team had to be the best out there, Mac his right-hand man and his best friend who was smart, cheeky and thought himself to be the funniest person alive and he probably was. Then there was Michael, Mac's Brother who was the opposite of Mac he was always dead serious and never understood a joke, Mac and Michael both were lean and strong, Michael had a jagged scar across his face and mac had a massive mustache. last but not least there was Sandra she was the brains of the group she was the smartest person you will ever meet. Them there's me I have around about the same build as Mac and Michael but I'M a little bit taller, I'm the leader of the group so it's my responsibility to look after them and I will.

Their mission was simple dig for a new source of energy on the moon and once found bring it back to earth. They were using a huge machine with a giant saw blade on it to cut through the rock what's the worst that could happen to guess what the worst happened! The saw malfunctioned and the blade came off and sliced through the machine and went straight through Michael. “Watch out” shouted Mac but it was too late Michael was gone.

Mac sobbed and sobbed until he could sob no more, then he was angry at everything the machinery, the government, and even the world. But after three days of sadness, he came to his senses and we had a funeral on the moon, Michael would be forever known as the first person to die on the moon and hopefully the last. When we came back to the saw it was gone! Along with every other piece of equipment we had! We couldn't believe our eyes. Instead of working that day we had a day off, the first day off in the history of the moon. Our day off was great but it was time to get back to work but first, we have to find our equipment, all of it. The trail of machinery marks lead us to a dark cave full of our equipment but it was guarded by Aliens! They started shooting at us one blast from there guns hit Sandra she fell o  to the ground badly injured but breathing, so we keep on fighting until all the aliens fell down dead. Quickly We grabbed all our equipment and ran just in case more aliens came. We rushed Sandra to our makeshift hospital but it was too late she was gone as well.
 

Mac and I decided to call off the mission and go back to earth too many people had died to continue with the mission, it was over we were going in the home.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Connor, I enjoyed your narrative set on the moon. You included humour and quality vocab. Your sentence structures were varied to enhance your writing. What do you think you could do to further improve this piece? ~Mrs Davan~

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